We’ve been working with fourth and fifth graders from a Bay Area school on ways to use Dizzywood in the classroom. These students, just like many of you, have been spending time exploring Dizzywood, learning how to work together to complete missions, and become acquainted with the Dizzywood story.
Because today is Halloween, we thought it would be a great idea to have them share their scary stories with all of you! So grab a cup of hot chocolate, turn down the lights, and be prepared to be spookified!
Thank you to the students for sharing your scary stories with all of us!
Happy Halloween!
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Glad u guys luv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hi!
i am gonna continue my story so u dont get hung up!
**continued**
(one week later)
I walked down the road to canal city. zapping monsters along the way. Sylivvia3 and i were doing an investigation on what could have turned me into a vampire. i never really blocked anyone, nobody thought of me as weird. ’someone was jealous of your life.’ Sylivvia3 had said. i had killed the creature, but it was gone when we got back to my mansion. there was a note where the other vampire was before. “beware of you friends, enemies, and others like us.” i was awed when i read that note. most of my life is now back to normal, except i have to feed once a day. i go to the endless wild to do that.
i stepped into canal city and got myself a sub with salami (the blud lust goes on).
Sylivvia3 walked up to me with a grave look on her face.
“Steaker was attacked.”
i froze. what was written on the note terrified me.
“it can’t be.”
“he is in my mansion right now. i think you should come.”
we walked together, half hoping that there were no other attacks.
Sylivvia3 and i walked into the guest room to find Steaker eating a raw hamburger.
“eww. even i would not do that.”
“that’s because you’ve been one for a month. me? THE LAST FEW HOURS!!!!!” he snapped, showing his fangs.
“you don’t scare me.” i sneered, half joking.
Steaker sensed that i was teasing and relaxed.
**to be continued as soon as possible**
**continued**
over the last month i was becoming a sorceress. i thought it was pretty weird, being a sorceress and a vampire. but Sylivvia3 insisted that i get stronger, just in case. we talked about how Steaker was. he was no longer comming out of his mansion. i went there with Sylivvia3 one day.
“WHOA! this place is a mess!” Sylivvia3 half yelled- half questioningly.
Steaker came out. His clothes and hair were tidy as usual. ever since he was attacked, he was starting to look a little like me. dark hair, red eyes, color changing skin.
” i don’t know what you mean he said. he snapped. the garbage wavered and disappeared.
i smelled a vapor. used magic.
“you learned how to clean up after yourself after all.” i joked.
Steaker glared for a few seconds,then went back to a joking smile. “have my princesses been eating lately?” he teased.
“for the last time, i am not a princess of darkness. that is a very serious matter. and besides, i don’t dress like a princess of darkness either.” i snapped. i was actually wearing a summer dress with flats.
i glided over and took one good look at him.
“you’re not taking this well, are you?’
“no. and i don’t feel like you must have when you first became a vampire.”
Sylivvia3 gave us both a red potion with eye changing toxins in it. the potion was suppost to dig up your eye color from your soul and fix you eyes to that exact color.
I drank mine and felt my eyes shift.
Steaker drank his and his eyes turned blue.
“ok,” Sylivvia3 said, “that should stay around until your guys’ next feeding.”
**to be continued**
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(and btw, my cousin didn’t make this up! i did!
**continued**
i sat in my mansion office, stroking my morpher absentmindedly. the dilema happened a month ago. the one that turned me into a vampire.
We never found out who did this to all of us. there was only one vampire to begin with. i faintly remember that creature, the beautiful, dangerous creature who made me this way.
***
i am being set up for sorcery lessons today, Sylivvia3 is teaching me, again. Steaker’s always late so we wait an extra ten minutes to get to class. thankfully, he gets here two minutes late.
“ok, so you all have heard of Deklin, and DJ, right?”
“yeah so.”
“and she uses a zip charm on him in one of their legends,”
“tell me more Syl’
“were going to learn it today.”
i get my staff out and pop my knuckles. this was going to be fun.
“Miki, place the zip charm on Steaker.”
i clap three times and pretended to zip my mouth quickly. Steaker felt where his mouth was.
“that was impressive. now put the reverse charm on him.”
i then spun and mouthed unlock.
Steaker gasped for breath and glared at Sylivvia3.
“i hate being the guinea pig.”
“well, Miki needs practice. just be glad she is good.”
**to be continued shortly**
NICE STORY I JUST READ IT. ITS SOOOO COOL. TO TELL YOU THE TRUTH IM THE REAL PRINSSES OF DARKNESS IN DIZZYWOOD I GUESS U AND ME HAVE SOMTHING INCOMIN. HEHE. WELL CAN U CONTINUE THE STORY PLZ , IM REALLY GETTING INTRESSTID. IF U DONT MIND MEET ME AT THE CLOTHING STORE AT 12;00 O’ CLOCK ON MONDAY, OK. IM REALLY LOOKING FORED TO IT. BYE
I want to be in school now on Dizzywood!
it was a dark stormy night………. all the lights in the town were down………………… BOOGADYBOOGADY BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
did i scare you??
hey it would be cool to have school but i really want to find the swimmig move scroll and get a swimsuit both of those i came up with about a month before they were launched i wonder if it was me
hey peoples of the past i have a couple of scary stories and i have a few in the one gather round for a scary story so i decided to share one about the halloween last year ok here goes
One gloomy halloween night kayta was tricker treating. it was the last night of the haloween party so once she got candy she decided to go dance at the party. she put on your best dress costume and headed for the party along the way she heard parts of the same story and got very scared when she finally got to the party she heard people talk about it saying if it was true or not she wanted to believe it was not true because it was about her death
This is a goofy story my friend told me.
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It was a dark and stormy night,
there was a bear,
the end.
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Isn’t it goofy?
Ok ill continue my story.
now it is plainly seen that i have solved my mystery. as i walk along in prestos edge people stare at me. they have no idea what i will do when night falls.
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ok im really running low on ideas so if my fans have any suggestions just post it!!!!!!!!!
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be sure to tell me why i cant finda… nvm♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
GOSSIPGIRL8334, THAT’S MY STORY! YOU JUST CHANGED THE NAMES!! >:O
OK I know its a long time after this buuuuuuut I’m going to put a story here for THIS Halloween! OK? OK
The vampire at the window
By:pinkgrrrl
Chapter one:what happened and when
Once upon a time a girl was brushing her teeth and on the night before Halloween and then all of a sudden a vampire was at the bathroom window!
Well she fainted and then the vampire broke the window and dragged her out.
Chapter two:Mara
Mara was the girl’s BFF and hear about her and the vampire well her old BFF got bitten by her.
To be continued…..
lol kewl story (im so late lol)
This is a true story……..One time there was a girl named helena she was a vampire who was 13 and she lived by herself in a tree house 10000000 years old but you know vampires cant age right? she built it..At halloween she heard a little baby whisper:you cant hide forever helena we will find you) She wasnt afraid so she went out for a little snack at 12:54 P.M. and she found a tasty mountain lion when she caught it everything went black…The next day Helena found herself in a coffen she tryed to open it but she couldnt..she didnt know she was burried…so she used her vampire stuff to open it and dig herself out she found out she was actruley burried under a house……TO BE CONTINUED……………
Woooo i wanna be a phantom! No im gone be a phantom on dw. :happy:
I want to get spookfield.
I cant wait till oct. so i can go to this halloween party!
I hope my buddies get to too i hope they be there too! 
HEHEHEHEHE I GOT A SCARY STORY FOR HALLOWEEN!!!!!!!! HEHEHEHEHEHE! LOL
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~MEEEE!
OMG Anonymous who said I copied you I’m sooooooooooo sorry I did that, I had no idea!!! I’m super-sorry and I’ll never write anything like that again, pinky-swearsies!!!
Heyy, GG here. I just told my best friend a story and I wanna share it.
“GG, please come to your mansion to claim your coins.” A voice at the Award Winning Competition said on the intercom. I screamed and yelped, “Woo-hoo, I won!!! YAY!!!” I danced and pranced. My best friend Escope was so happy for me. “Escope, are you going to get me a present?” I asked loudly. “I think you got your present…” Escope said. Escope is really shy. “Kaleidoscope!” I screamed. “Hey, call me Escope!” Escope screamed in my ear. “Hows ’bout I just go home?” I started. “And don’t you even bother to come and follow me.” I continued. And with that, I got on my skateboard and started home.
I was almost home. The only thing that stopped me was a girl with a black hoodie with the hood over her head, a long black skirt, and black boots. “Who… who are you?” I stuttered. “I’m Poplar.” The girl rasped. “POPLAR??? Wow,you sure changed!” I fake grinned. “Yeah, I think I know that.” Poplar uneasily giggled. Poplar took her hood down and smiled. “Hey, wanna come to my house and swim in coins?” I kind of joked. “Sure. I do have my bathing suit.” Poplar said, trying not to open her mouth. So I lead her into my mansion.
“Hmm, nice place. Little roomy, but…” Poplar grinned. “Thanks, I work on it sometimes.” I love the spotlight. “Hey, um… GG?” Poplar said. “Yeah, Poplar?” I asked. “Where’s the bathroom?” Poplar replied. “Here, I’ll show you.” I said, taking Poplar up the stairs and into the bathroom. Then, Poplar shut the door with me in the room. And then…
…Poplar bit my neck. “VAMPIRE!!!” I screamed. Poplar curled her lip and hissed. “You don’t want to tell anyone.” She sneered. “And why not?” I asked. “Because everybody would try to burn me. Not just me, but you!” Poplar uncurled her lip and licked the blood off my neck. “So? We’re vampires. We can bite people.” I said, shrugging my shoulders. “I don’t think I made it clear. Other vampires would try to burn us. And… well… most vampires are really powerful.” Poplar was sure about this. “I won’t tell. I promise.” I said, opening the door. Then when I was walking down the stairs to leave, Poplar pounced on me and bit my neck more.
The next day, Aidie came walking to my mansion door. “Hey, Aidie.” I said, trying to hide my fangs. “Sup, GG?” Aidie smiled. When she saw the scar on my neck, she frowned. “Eh, I’m ok. Nothing really happening.” I said, accidentally showing my fangs. “V… v… va… va… vam… VAMPIRE!!!!!!!” Aidie stuttered. “It’s ok, I won’t bite you. But if you don’t wanna be bitten… stay away from Poplar.” I whispered. “Why? Is Poplar a vampire?” Aidie asked. “I can’t say that, but just stay away from her. She’s dangerous.” I said, squeezing my eyes shut. “Oh, ok. Can I tell Kaleidoscope you’re a vampire?” Aidie asked. “No way. You can’t tell anyone I’m a vampire. You can drop hints like I did, but don’t tell anyone.” I said. Then I just realized that I blew Poplar’s secret.
…To be continued…
(Sigh) I wasnt on dizzywood to write my story but I’ll tell it to ya anyways! I wrote it in reel so Im going to copy it.
The Shallow Water
By: Cutiegirl23
Introduction
You would not beleive your eye’s when you had just seen what happened to my friends… You would be screaming into the night, and telling everyone about the blood-drinkers. Your parent’s would be yelling and calling the police when you told them. They would be terrified.
Chapter 1: Meeting new kids
When I woke up in the early dawn, the drops of water trickled down the pipe at the side of the house. I had laid out my clothes the night before the weekend ended. It was a new day, a bright new Monday. I slipped into my lavender blouse and some blue jeans. I was looking for my Converse. I fianlly found the shoes and slipped them on. I ran down stairs to grab my bag. (but despite almost falling and maybe even breaking your ankle) I got my bag and put it over my shoulders. “Bye Dad, Bye Mom!” I shouted down stairs. I swiftly ran out of the doors and ran to school. When I was nearly by the entrance/exit of the school I gasped for a breath. Middle school was alot harder than Elemantary school. I walked to my class and sat down quitely. “Students we will be having a new student today,” Said Mrs. Dillard. “He is quite polite and very gentle,” She added getting side-tracted. “Please welcome our new student, David.” Mrs. Dillard anouced and David came in. “Amy, will you raise your hand please?” Mrs. Dillard had asked me. I raised my hand and David stared at me. I wanted to say “What are you looking at?” But I didnt. There was something starnge about David. He looked like a angel, He look as white as a paper and his eyes were a gentle topaz. David glared at me and I flinched.
**To Be Continued**
Find out in the next chapter of ‘The Shallow Water’ Coming out in December 11th 2009! If you love romantic and vampires, You’ll love The Shallow Water.
Narue Sasaki
Ch. 1: Be Very Afraid
I walked around my living room. I didn’t know why my Japanese house looked so… German. I guess it’s just because the builders were German. I’m not so sure.
I sat on my handmade silk couch. It was filled with real sheared sheep wool. After I sat down, I heard a creak in the dining room. “H… hello?” I stuttered. No answer, it must’ve been my imagination. I laid back, thinking about how stupid I was to think a stranger was in my house.
As I laughed at myself, I heard a knock on the wall. I opened my eyes and sat up. “Um… p… p… please leave!” I stammered. I heard murmuring and more creaking. Then, my back door opened and shut. Then I thought to myself, ‘Hey, that was pretty creepy.’ and laid back down. But right when I thought everything was fine, I heard my back door reopen.
To be continued…
Ch. 2: Poor Me
Makookla and I were standing on the side of kittenkayt’s deathbed. I guess the doctors thought she was dying. “Kittenkayt! Are you ok?” I asked. She was lifting her head and blinking. “Only if you think being half-dead and being bloodless is ok!” Kittenkayt said, agitated. Her eyebrows went down. She also sounded a bit tired.
“Kittenkayt, you get some rest. Sylvvia will be here soon.” Makookla calmly said, tucking kittenkayt back into the covers. “Sure thing. And, Makookla, go with GossipGirl to tell the doctors I’m alive.” Kittenkayt said, closing her eyes. “Ok kittenkayt,-” Makookla said, then turned to me “-let’s go GG.” Makookla finished, grabbing my hand. We ran off to talk to the doctors.
When Makookla and I got back, Sylvvia3 was standing by a few doctors, nurses, and kittenkayt. “Omigosh, SYLVVIA!!!” Makookla squealed, running up to Sylvvia3 and hugged her. “Um… hi. This is… awkward. Gossip… help me.” Sylvvia3 breathed. “Call me GG, and ok.” I said, trying to pry Makookla’s hands off Sylvvia3’s back. When Makookla finally let go, she hissed at me and bit my arm.
“OW!!!” I screamed. Venom was thrushing through my veins. “Makookla… why…?” I breathed, falling. Right before I blacked out, I saw everyone bend down and look at me.
When I woke up, I was in a deathbed. “GG, look. I’m sorry. I just… really missed Sylvvia3.” Makookla said, looking into my eyes. “It’s ok, Makookla. Am I a vampire now?” I said, looking back into her bright red eyes. “Yes, welcome to the vampire race. You are no longer mortal.” Makookla congragulated me. “Thanks.” I said. I looked from Pinkgrrrl to Makookla to Sylvvia3 to the doctors and back to Pinkgrrrl. Then, I turned to my pillow and fell back asleep.
“I think GG just went to die.” “No way! She’s sleeping!” “Makookla and Sylvvia3, you’re both wrong. GG just passed out.” “No!” “Nuh-uh!” “Yeah, she did!” “Liar!” “Liar, liar, pants on fire, nose as long as a telephone wire!” “I am not!” “You sure are too!” “Makookla, just SHUT UP!” I heard everyone say. I had no idea who was talking. I don’t even think I remember the voices, let alone know who Makookla, Pinkgrrrl, and Sylvvia3 are.
Ch. 3: Try to Remember
“GG! GG! Oh, GG! Wake up!” A girl cried. I flitted my eyes open. “Who the heck are you?” I asked. “You don’t remember me; Makookla?!” The girl cried again. “Like… Muh-cook-laah?” I asked, dumbfounded. “Uh-huh. I’m your… best bud.” Makookla grinned. “That’s funny, you’re pale, your teeth are sharp, and your eyes are red.” I said, tittering. “So are your’s…” Makookla pointed. “Hey, who are the girls on your hoodie?” I asked, pointing at the picture on her sweatshirt. “Well, I’m in the middle, Pinkgrrrl is on the left, and Sylvvia3 is on the right.” Makookla said, pointing to each as she said them.
“Sylvvia3 and Pinkgrrrl?” I asked, still dumbfounded. “They’re my best friends next to you.” Makookla smiled. “Ugh, it’s so dark on this empty street. Isn’t there at least ONE streetlight?” I went on, frowning. “I don’t know… maybe a block ahead.” Makookla shrugged her shoulders. “And I remember this one girl; kittenkayt, I think her name is.” I said. “Yeah. I… bit her.” Makookla murmured. My eyes fixed on her’s. “Really? How? Did she taste ok?” I asked.
“Yes, really. I’m a vampire. And oh, how she tasted. Her blood was so… delectable!” Makookla said, staring at my neck. “Is everyone a vampire, or only you? Am I a vampire? What is a vampire?” I asked. I had so many questions. “Well, only some people are vampires. Yes, you are a vampire. A vampire is an immortal; someone who can not die.” Makookla replied, half wheezing. “How did I become a vampire?” I asked. “I bit you, like I said before.” Makookla said.
“What did I taste like? Tell me the procidure on how exactly you bit me.” I said. “You tasted different; I’ve never tasted a mortal like you. And first I turned and hissed at you. Then I lowered my head to your upper arm. I quickly centered my mouth on your arm, and I bit down-hard.” Makookla said. “I’m surprised I’m not dead. Maybe I should bite you; see if that’ll kill you and teach you a lesson.” I said, narrowing my eyes.
I’m starting a story! (PEOPLE, IT’S COPYWRITTEN)
Ch. 1: The Sleepover
“GG!” Makookla called.
“GG! Come on!” She called again.
“I’m hurrying!” I screamed. I was in my dressing room getting into my pajamas. I had a couple of friends over for a sleepover in my mansion. I guess they were expecting me.
“Um… GG?” Makookla said, with a hint of tension in her voice. I peeked out the door. “Yes?” I asked. “Pinkgrrrl and Rose are going to leave if you don’t hurry.” Makookla said, pointing at very angry looking Pinkgrrrl and Rose1451.
“Just… tell them you’re going to play truth or dare. I bet everyone else will be occupied while I’m busy too.” I said a little bit too quiet. “Ok, thanks.” Makookla said, and then turning to Pinkgrrrl and Rose1451. “Hey, guys! Guess what we’re doing!” Makookla shouted. “Oh yeah, and Miki?” I asked. Makookla turned back to me. “Yes?” She replied. “Thanks for not letting them leave.” I said, then shrank back into the dressing room and closed the door.
“GG!” Pinkgrrrl called.
“GG! Answer me!” Pinkgrrrl called again, sounding mad. I was texting madly on my iPhone.
I finally looked up. “WHAT do you WANT?!” I screamed, my mouth staying tight. “I told you, I dared you to lick the floor!” Pinkgrrrl shouted. My brow furrowed. “Huh? No you didn’t.” I said. “Sure she did! You were texting, so you didn’t hear.” Rose1415 stated. “Oooooh, ok.” I said. Then, I got down and licked my bedroom floor.
*THE NEXT DAY*
“Hey, Miki!” Pinkgrrrl said as Makookla started towards my front door. Makookla looked back. “Yeah?” She asked. “Can I carpool with you? Someone called CoolPerson stole my skateboard.” Pinkgrrrl said. I thought CoolPerson821 was a familiar name.
TO BE CONTINUED…
HI GG!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Makookla
HI MAKOOKLA!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Happy you’re in my story? ^3^
GossipGirl8334 all of you stories are freaky
this is dragona this is a real scary story
there was this girl caaaled larna and the sabble boy callled tim he was a bit mean to larna so shes decides to get him back she found a mask it was horrible when she came to to the sattle she put the mask on it felt like skin when she put it on she could not take it off and then roared not a human roar i animal one and the mask because her face she went inside the barn with horses in there they bolted up and knocked the boy and a stamplede and the sabtle boy died and larna did to and all the horses died to nobody knows why the horses died now all three of them roam and haunt the stables at night midnight you can still hear the wailling of the horses and the boy but larna kept trying to find the mask again to do more evil with it then comes Carly beth and her friend milly now carly has the mask burried somwhere so larna knows she has it so she hants carly and then larna goes and unburry it and founds it just before she puts the masks carly and milly come out to stop her shes uses magic and pushes milly but with her magic carly dodges it and grabs the mask and puts it on she and larna fight and larna loses but carly still has he mask just then there is a bright flash and carly gone milly and clark carlys best
friend see that shes gone the mask has claimed her and killed her.larna surrives the fight but is still a ghost and then she meets carly again and carly does not know shes a ghost the mask comes off and goes back to to living world to claim people vitims.so milly and clark walk home then a werewolf nearly bites them but missed so milly and clark walk to carly house to tell her parents that carly died but when they get threre they find there are dead and carlys brother milly and clark find his dead body on his bed then there her a voice it said “what to hang out together guys” and they turn around and see carly ghost they say”how did you die i dont know and carly all of your famliy dead carly says “what” the ghost of carly goes over to her brother called noah and then crys and goes downside to see her parents dead to then carly vanises milly and clark never saw carly again the place is closed now is a hauted house now
and it was the night before halloween on halloween these three boys all brothers called billy,matt,greg they said why not go tick o treat at the hauted house and then i vampire comes out of the house and grabs billy.
billy was matt brother matt says”i should never listen to you greg my little brother gotten bitten by a vampire because of you”then matt runs inside the hauted house and then greg rans inside to next day poilce seach but the boys were never found.muhhhhhaaaaa muhhhhhhhaaaa
i’m very happy!!!!!!!! xD.
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