We’ve been working with fourth and fifth graders from a Bay Area school on ways to use Dizzywood in the classroom. These students, just like many of you, have been spending time exploring Dizzywood, learning how to work together to complete missions, and become acquainted with the Dizzywood story.
Because today is Halloween, we thought it would be a great idea to have them share their scary stories with all of you! So grab a cup of hot chocolate, turn down the lights, and be prepared to be spookified!
Thank you to the students for sharing your scary stories with all of us!
Happy Halloween!
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aneettia come on i’m counting on u make more story’s
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Aneettia please make more of your series!!! They are the best PS I LOVE THE SORCERESS!!! >:D
I have a scary story. It’s true, too!
Once there was a girl named Alyssa. She had two best friends named James Whiletaker and Tim Waterno. One day, Alyssa decided to go to James’ house one day.
Alyssa walked into James’ home, and guess what she sees? “Whoa… everything is all torn up and… scratchy.” Alyssa said, her world spinning to fast to think up an answer why. And she was right, everything was torn. The wallpaper was peeling. All the furniture was scratched up and shredded slightly.
“It isn’t too spooky, is it?” A taunting voice, that made Alyssa shiver, boomed. The voice sounded familiar to Alyssa. It sounded like…
“Tim…?!?!” Alyssa cried, her mind trying to erase what Alyssa thought was the truth. “Yes, it is I, Tim Waterno! MUA-HA-HA-HA-HA!!!!!” The eerie voice continued. “Did you do ALL THIS, Tim?!” Alyssa squealed with horror and confusion. “Of course I did, dimwit!” Tim growled. Then, he beared his fangs. Alyssa gasped. “Fangs!?! Your a vampire, AREN’T YOU, TIM?!?!” Alyssa furied.
…To be continued…
I have a story, too. And It’s true.
Once upon a time, there was a girl named Lynn. She was very pretty and very rich. She had many friends, and most were boys. Her two best friends were Robby and Deklin, both boys. One day, Lynn got bored, so she decided to go visit Deklin at his house.
“Hello, Deklin? Are you home?” Lynn shouted upon entering. Then she gasped. It looked like some animal came in and tore everything up. The couches were overturned, the wallpaper was peeling, and there were fresh claw marks everywhere.
‘I didn’t know Deklin had a cat, let alone a LION!’ Lynn thought. She imagined a giant cat walking in and scratching at the pillars and furniture, as if they were cat toys. The thought made her chuckle half – heartedly. But, shortly after, she was ready to leave. “This place is creepy… But where is Deklin?” Lynn muttered to her self. Then, her heart jumped and she turned pale.“Oh, Deklin! What happened?!”
“It’s creepy, isn’t it?” joked an evil, raspy voice from behind Lynn.
She slowly turned her head and saw a wolf creature, standing in the middle of the room. It looked like…
“Deklin?!” Lynn gasped, taking a step back. “Is that you??”
“Yeah, Lynn, it’s me alright. Isn’t it great? I have power now. I’m the strongest guy in all of Dizzywood.” Then he showed off his muscles and large, pointy teeth.
“You… You’re not even human! You’re a… a werewolf!” cried Lynn, in tears.
“So? I’m strong now. Don’t mind the furniture; I was just testing my limits… It seems I don’t have any.”
“How… how did this happen?”
“Don’t know….. I was in the woods, and I saw some kid. He looked okay, exept for his teeth. I waved, and he smiled – he had fangs. He ran twards me all of a sudden, and, for crying our loud, he BIT me! And then, BAM! I grow fur and sharp teeth.” Deklin answered, disintrested.
Lynn was about to argue when Deklin added, “I also grew quite an appitite… for flesh.”
Lynn stood, staring at her former friend, dumbstruck. She took a second to let all this new information seep in, when she finaly analyzed what Deklin had said. But, it was too late. Deklin was on all fours now, ready to pounce.
Then, fast as lightning, he jumped – and landed on top of Lynn.
She let out a horrifying scream – then an agonizing moan. Then, for Lynn, everything went black.
At that moment, Deklin went under another transformation – one for the better. His skin returned to it’s nautral, creamy pale color, and his fur and fangs shrank and disapeared. It was a moment before he realized what he had done. He looked down at Lynn and gasped.
“Lynn? Lynn, wake up!” he shouted, lifting her off the floor and into his arms. Slowly, her eyes opened. “Deklin?” she moaned. “Help…”
“Lynn, I’m so sorry. Please, stay with me.” Deklin demanded. Then, he hopped up, Lynn still in his arms, jumped over some furniture, and raced out the door. But he stopped in his tracks, because there was a kid standing in the doorway. It was the kid from the forest. The other werewolf.
He was wearing a mask- but it looked just like his real face. Or so Deklin thought. Then, the stranger grabbed the mask and ripped it off. Lynn, still very weak and vournerable, gasped. Then, she whispered something in Deklin’s ear. It horrified him more that his werewolf form horrified Lynn.
“It’s Robby.” Lynn whispered. “Robby Udelhofen.”
To be continued….
Continued……
“Robby! YOU did this!” shouted Deklin who put Lynn down onto the ground gently and glared at Robby.
“Why? Why me? Why at all?” he sputtered, his teeth clenched. “I trusted you. Lynn trusted you.”
“Why? Why, why did I turn you into a wolf? It was part of my master plan to get rich quick. One day, I thought, ‘Hey, I’m a werewolf. How ’bout I use that to my advantage?’ So, I formulated a plan. You’d get bitten and go insane when Lynn arrived. Then, you would kill her, and there’d be a reward for both of ya’. Since the police AND Lynn’s parents’ are rich, I decided, ‘Hey! What the heck.’ But, since LYNN isn’t dead, and YOU aren’t a killer, I’ll have to do this the old fashioned way.”
Then, he began shaking violently, and his skin grew fur, and his teeth grew fangs.
He was now an any-moon wolf.
Deklin braced himself, ready to attack, when he noticed something. Robby was staring at Lynn, not himself. Robby was going after Lynn.
Then he lunged.
“NOOOO!” Deklin screamed, and jumped in front of Lynn. He ran right into Robby, who looked violent – he had a wild look in his eyes.
Then, Robby grabbed Lynn and ran away at top speed, Deklin trailing weekly behind.
Then, Deklin turned into a wolf and followed faster.
To be continued…
Continued…
“Come back here!” shouted Deklin, running at full speed to catch up with Robby. He could hear Lynn’s terrified screams. That meant she was still alive, at least.
Then, they turned and ran through a dense forest, where trees were tall and blocked out all light. It was as if it was night.
“Don’t bother following me. You’ll never catch up, let alone save your ‘precious Lynn.’ She’s mine now!” whispered Robby, who somehow made his voice echo into Deklin’s ear.
Then, Robby let out an awful, screeching laugh – and, when combined with Lynn’s screams, it was so loud and ear-piercing that Deklin had to cover his ears.
“Heads up!” mocked Robby, and turned his head to face Deklin, somehow not running into anything.
“See how you can handle my ‘Sonic Howl’!’”
Then, he let out an awful roar – even worse then his laugh. It was so strong that it knocked Deklin off his feet, and he flew backwards.
“DEEEEEEKLIN!!!” Lynn screamed, staring wide-eyed at Deklin from Robby’s arms. Then, they disappeared into the fog and trees, as well as Lynn’s screams for help.
Suddenly, Deklin hit a tree, and everything went black.
* * * * *
“Hey, you okay? Wakie wakie, eggs and bakie.” taunted a playful but sassy voice. Deklin opened one eye at stared up at the girl before him.
She had pale skin, and had very pale hair in long, beautiful braids. She wore a large red raincoat that was buttoned all the way to the top, except for the collar, which revealed a vanilla turtleneck sweater. She also wore black sneakers. She looked at least 16.
“Hi. I’m Danielle, but you can call me DJ. So, what’s your name? And what are you doing in Hunt Forest, especially at a time like this?” she pondered.
“None of your business. How do I get out of here??” sneered Deklin.
At that moment, DJ got a scowl on her face, and made some strange hand movements. She then took out a large staff, and shoved it into the air. Deklin was thrusted into the air, too. “Hey!!!” he shouted. Then, he realized what had happened – he had just met a young sorceress.
“Now, now. You didn’t use your manners.” said DJ, looking down and wagging her finger.
“LET ME DOWN!!!!” screamed Deklin, wriggling around in the air with no luck. Until he satisfied DJ, he was stuck. “I don’t have time for this!”
“You forgot the magic word.” hinted DJ, silently laughing at her own ‘joke.’
“What are you talking about?” he shouted, still trying to escape the wind’s grasp.
“Some people never learn, do they…” sighed DJ. With a snap of her fingers, Deklin fell to the ground – hard.
“Listen, buddy. I know who and WHAT you’re after – and I can help.” she offered.
To be Continued…
Continued…..
“So, you’re a Kindly One, eh?” wondered DJ out loud as she and Deklin followed the trail to the train station.
“A what??? What’s a Kindly One?” asked Deklin.
“A Kindly One – that’s the name we give YOU’RE kind.” grunted DJ through clenched teeth. She seemed aggrivated, like being around a werewolf was some kind of bad omen to her clan.
At that, Deklin shuddered. DJ was just like Lynn – headstrong and rebellious. But she only broke rules when she had to.
Twenty minutes later, after walking in frustrated silence, DJ and Deklin reached the train station. They walked up to the ticket counter.
“Here, I have $50.00 in my pock–” Deklin began, but gasped. DJ reashed into her big coat pocket and pulled out a roll of fifty $100.00 dollar bills.
She gave the numb ticket-master a single $100.00 bill. “Two please.” she demanded, and snatched the tickets. As they boarded the train, Deklin looked back at the ticketmaster and stifled a laugh. Deklin looked ready to faint.
* * * * *
On the train, DJ sat in the corner of the room, staring at the quickly-passing landscape of Dizzywood. She sighed. Deklin felt bad for her, but he didn’t know why. He assumed she felt alone. So, he went over to comfort her.
“Are you okay? You seem down. What’s up?” He asked her. She pouted in response. “None of you’re buisiness.” she hissed, not looking up.
“Oh, come on. I’m just trying to help to cheer you u——” Deklin began, but stopped. DJ turned around in her seat – her eyes glowing red – and clapped her hands three times. Then, she made a swift movement, where she appeared to be zipping Deklin’s mouth closed. When Deklin tried to ask her what she was doing, though, he couldn’t open his mouth. He touched his lips – and found a zipper there, and it was stuck!
“If you HAVE to know, it’s a long story.”
To be Continued…
Continued…
Using her powers, DJ lifted Deklin into the air, and dropped him on the floor on the other side of the room.
“I shouldn’t be here.” she whispered, half to herself, half to Deklin.
Then she began.
“When I was 7, I lived with my mother, father, and two brothers, who were older than me.
“Everything was great – life was normal. We were… kinda’ rich. I didn’t have any powers. I was safe.”
Then, she looked down – a single tear hit the floor of the train car. Her tone became strict, sturdy..
“But not for long.
“One day – out of the blue – we were all at home. It was my birthday, and I was turning 8. My parents sent me to my grandmother’s house, because they were setting up for a surprise birthday party for me. I was at Grann’s for about an hour. Then – when I got home -
“It was gone.
“What was left of it was devistating. The house was all melted, covered in goo. My room was the worst, though – there was nothing left. It was like the attacker…. was after me.
“The only things that weren’t melted were a strange, blue chest, and one single present.
“I ripped open the present, wondering what it was. Inside was a golden key. On the side, one word was engraved.
“‘Believe.’
“I then ran over to the chest, avoiding the melting remains of my old house. I stuck the key in the lock. Then, the safe bagan to glow a strange yellow color. It blinded me.
“When the light went away, the chest slowly opened by itself. Many things were inside: These clothes I’m wearing, my coat, my staff, a map that showed where a magical camp for young girls, where they learned to use their powers…..
“And a note from my mom.
“‘We’re safe, Danielle.’ it said. ‘But we need your help. Follow the map, and your destiny will be unlocked. Please save us.’
“But I never found the camp. I looked for days. I spent most of my time with my grandmother, who taught me how to use my staff. She was a sorceress, too. Was. But then they got her. The house was covered in goo. I could never find out wh the EXACT attacker was, but it was the same each time. I was all alone. Now, I’m not. But I’m stuck with ANOTHER werewolf.”
Then, her face in her hands, DJ cried silently. It was now night. Eventually, she fell asleep. Finnaly, the Zip charm she had used on Deklin wore off, and his mouth returned to normal. He took her to her bed, laid her down, then got into his own. There, he thought about DJ’s words.
Deklin listened to the story in his mind over and over again, trying to pick out intricate details.
That’s when it hit him.
‘We were… kinda’ rich.’ DJ had told him. She had also said something, after telling the story, about being stuck with ‘another’ werewolf. About not knowing who the exact attacker was.
But, now, Deklin knew.
He was more than a traitor. More than an awful person. He was a SICK person.
Robby did it. Robby was a killer, even before he had met Deklin and Lynn.
To be Continued…
I have a scary story. It’s a true one.
Once, there was a girl named Grace. She was very rich and lived by herself. She had many friends, mostly boys. Two of her friends’ names were Tim and James. One day, Grace got bored so she headed on to Tim’s house.
“Anybody hooooome?” Grace bellowed as she stumbled through the door. She abruptly stared wide-eyed at the furniture and wallpaper. The furniture was torn and scratched. The wallpaper was curling. ‘I didn’t know Tim had a cat, let alone a LION!’ Grace thought.
“It’s spooky, isn’t it?” Joked an eerie and mysterious voice. It sounded a bit like…
“Tim?!?” Grace asked, confused. She turned around, and stared into the eyes of a wild beast. It looked sort of like a “Werewolf. Yes, I AM a werewolf!” Tim howled in delight. Then Tim got in a position that looked like he was about to pounce. But then, abruptly, Tim lunged for Grace, leaving her screaming in fear.
To be continued…
*Vicky
SORRY FOR THE MISSPELLING!!!
PS: Vicky was spelled Vicly in ‘Vicly taunted’.
Oh, and, for my story with Grace, I got mixed up and used Deklin instead of Tim!!! Sorry for the inconvinience!
LOL SMILEYS:
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The dizzywood team came to my school!!!
i luv playing on dizzywood it rocks!!! The partys were great and i luved the snow there at christmas hope seeing more new cool things again.
Hallowen in dizzywood was awsome i luved the spooky costumes they were awsome as well, also the bats were very affective. SPOOKY!!!! lol
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Woah! how many stories r there? kewlio ppl. Nice work. I dnt no wat else 2 put so see yall.ttyl ttfn
lol this season is over lol
SCARY stories and I am just reading them and it is Feburary
Happy halloween everybody
happy halloween
man i luv scary stories but i cod do better no effence but i tell averyone stories they said mine wer better………
It was mid night of halloween. As I walked down syairs carrying my trickor treat sweets i heard a scream from the garden. I saw vampires!
aww i wish they came to my school? =(
omg how do u do those hearts (i just copy and paste it) you know these ones:♥♥♥
Dizzywood team, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE COME TO MY SCHOOL
These stories are soo cool!
ANEETTA! PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER STORY!!!! I CAN’T WAIT
One day a boy named superA went for a walk in Prestos Edge.Then he saw the 4 Weather Wizards!He did a mission for them.Later, when he came back to the Wizards, they gave him all of their magic powers and a cool hat!Presto had heard the news about superA.He asked him to do a mission for him.He had to defeat Emporer Withering!SuperA went to Tanglevine Cliff and saw Emporer Withering’s hot air baloons heading towards the Onakasi Ruins!He had no choice, he had to get help from Onca and Yagu!Kan the Geomancer also had to help.The ghosts could shoot ghost energy balls and go through walls while Kan could turn people into crystals.SuperA could use his new wizard powers to defeat people.Later when they got onto Withering’s zeppelin, superA found out that Withering had captured superDJW, superA’s brother!The ghosts used their combined power to free superDJW.He joined the team.Next, they found Withering.They used all their combined powers to defeat Withering!They all reported back to Presto.He rewarded them with a million coins!SuperA got a mansion,Onca had the Onakasi Empire reborn, Yagu got an assistant to guard the Jaguar Temple,and superDJW got a giant feeder for his twinklepig!And all of Dizzywood was happy again!
ANEETTA plz plz plz plz plz PLZ finish ur seiries! Plz plz plz plz plz plz PLZ PLZ PLZ PPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
dizzywoods great
i dont know a thing about this!
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Aneettia, please finish soon! I mean even I can’t write that good!
Dizzywood,why did you go to bay area school???You could have gone to my school.RES.i know bay area schools in fordia.
one day g123n was in the planting land when is was done playing with kat de claw one of the evel plants came but then this girl shadowlight and me got ride of it and that is how i meet my friend shadowlight gn says thanks!
once in a blue moon! a werewolf will appere little anne heard a guythe raido. ya right! she sed as she turnd off the raido. it was supposed to be a blue moon tonight, and anne was thinking of wat she herd on the raido. ya like that is ever gonna happen she sed to her self, shaking. that night just before it got dark anne’s mother came and asked her to go run down to the contrey store. anne sed yes, knowing that if she sed no her mother whuld make her go anyways. it was starting to get dark, and anne wasnt anywhere near the contrey store. the words of the guy on the raido keeped ringing in her head, once in a blue moon a werewolf will appere. anne had just got to the contrey store when, she herd a noise. anne turned around fast!, but there was nothing there. haha just mi imagination. she sed. she went to the contrey store and got the stuff her mother wrote on a list she gave her. as she was coming out of the store, she heard that noise again. as she turned around to go back in the store and call her dad to come and pick her up, something grabed her, it was something harry, something big, and something with big hands. she turned around and there it was, the werewolf. anne screamed. she tryed to open the door to the shop, but it was locked… and that night that werewolf had a good snack. and that just goes to show never underestamate the raido.
ok so one day on holloween it was midnight and I was at home with my critters in my spa so than the clock in there started to change and the date on the calender changed the date on the calender was when all the ppl in pompeii died it said 76 a ancient rome time aand I was dressed in these weird clothes and I waas like wat the… aand a kid said wasabi! and I said u r so weird! so he blew up and died and than I did because a valcano of ash hit me and I was 30 feet under it and I died was that scary to be continued…
A TRUE STORY!:
Once when i was at school in grade 3, someone in the girls washroom said bloody mary.The next day there was a RED hand, that someone stamped on the wall!
-or maybe its just red paint?? remember it’s a true story!
Once there was a blue moon…and I heard a piercing scream without knowing it it was my scream. I turned around and looked at my arm. A werewolve bit it!
That is how i’m a werewolve today…
Hey I love u dizzy wood i hope u have more stuff and i mean COOL NEW stuff for members like me
I think i write the most scariest stories O.O
some of u guys may not know it, but im a vampire!!!
i heard this story from my cousin andrea.
i am going to revise it.
it was a dark and stormy night here in dizzywood. i was walking to my mansion with my morpher in tow. when i reached my front door there was a note. “beware of the pale skins”.
i ignored it and went inside. i suddenly felt cold. very cold. i noticed another note on my air conditioner. “the pale skins are near. beware!”
i was starting to feel frightened. i shook it off and went into my room. there inside was a beautiful creature with red eyes. my morpher tensed and ruffled it’s flower shaped feathers to look big.
“good evening.” the creature said.
i was in shock. the creature poised for attack. next thing i knew i blacked out.
****
“dude?”
i could faintly hear my buddy Steaker talking to me. i opened my eyes and saw his worried face.
“what’s going on?” i demanded.
“Miki, your covered in blud!”
i sprung to my feet. i saw a limp body in a corner.
the creature i saw last night.
i ran to my bathroom. MY EYES WERE BLUD RED!
continued…
i ran back to Steaker.
“my eyes” i whispered, “they’re red.”
Steaker suddenly tensed.
“i know what happened.” he whispered, “you’re a vampire.”
i froze. i shook and stared a Steaker.
Steaker spoke up. “you don’t want my blud, do you?”
“no. i feel normal. a little.”
“we have to get you out of those clothes. i’m taking you to Sylivvia3.”
“what can she do?”
“help you”
**to be continued**
**continued**
we walked up to Sylivvia3’s mansion wearily. for we did not know how i would react to a dizzywood citizen. i stayed behind Steaker as he knocked on the door. out stepped Sylivvia3.
“oh hi Steaker.” then she noticed me, ‘hey Miki.”
i spoke up, “can we come in?”
“sure, i guess. go into the lab, you guys.”
we walked into her lab.
“we have a problem, uh, Miki got attacked last night. some sort of vampire.” Steaker said.
“well, lets go fix it then.”
Sylivvia3 went to her file cabinet and brought out a cup and some sort of red potion. i gave it a look, then i knew.”
“eye color changer?”
“yep.”
Sylivvia3 poured a cup and gave it to me. i smelled it.
“why does it smell like blud?”
“so you will drink it.”
i drank it and Sylivvia3 gave me a mirror. i looked at my face. my hair had changed from blonde to brunette. but after drinking the potion my eyes were my normal brown.
“that stuff works.”
Sylivvia gestured for me to sit down.
“are you thirsty/”
“what do you mean?”
“for blud.”
“no. it’s like i said to Steaker. i feel normal. a little.”
Sylivvia3 looked at me in a strange way.
“you’re acting normal too.”
i felt the need to whistle for my morpher. i felt scared. so i did.
my morpher flew in from the window in the room. and took a good look at me. i knew he was thinking how weird i smelled, and why my hair was different.
“uh, Miki,” Sylivvia3 countered, “i think you were partcially genetically altered. your hair and eyes are different, and your diet too. but you act the same as always, just nervous in your surroundings. if anyone questions you, say someone colored your hair.”
i felt better at the thought that i was slightly changed.
**to be continued**
if you guys read my story, UR AWESOME!!!!!
-Makookla (also my name on dizzywood)
Hey I LOVE all the stories !!!!
♥♥♥Behappyitsme* * *
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